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Instant Poetry

This is an excerpt from an interesting chat I had with ‘chhuchi’. After receiving threats of missing out on a chocolate that she was supposedly gonna share with me, for baseless charges of making fun of her looks, I had to come up with this in some 2-3 mins…

When you were walking towards the canteen,
In that flowing orange dress,
I look inside, where my heart should’ve been,
Couldn’t find a trace.

The flowers were shy,
Couldn’t compete with your eyes,
Your smile like a gentle breeze.

When you get chocolate,
From P. dai,
Can I have a bite too, please :)

… and guess what! I got the chocolate.

Categories: humor, poetry
  1. April 30, 2008 at 9:29 am | #1

    :)

  2. Nite_Lite
    April 30, 2008 at 10:02 am | #2

    Didn’t know you could do it that instantly, that also for Chocolates!!!

    Born Poet. hhmmm….

  3. abish
    May 10, 2008 at 10:16 am | #3

    :) poet

  4. June 4, 2008 at 1:11 am | #4

    Mr. Instant poet,
    Who is is the lady?
    What’s the story about the canteen…dress… breeze…?
    Chocolate!
    & how does P Dai come in the scene?

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    Ke ho dai!?! bujhera ni nabujheko jasto garne!!!

    - theCipher

  5. June 4, 2008 at 8:57 pm | #5

    :D

    {pahila pahila bujhinthyo, aajkal ali bujhna garo bhako chha}

  6. June 9, 2008 at 3:01 pm | #6

    What do we call the instant poets, आँशुकवि?? Maybe we have one more आँशुकवि in Nepal. :)
    And gee, I see you turning into a serious lover-boy.
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    A man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do.

    - theCipher

  7. BiDuR
    June 11, 2008 at 12:59 pm | #7

    Its all the effects of love…once you fall in it poem generates itself in ur hearts, in ur thoughts and in ur words….and you wish to alias urself as BairagiKainla :P

    hehee.

    Never mind..the ad lib poem was good and the Chocolate must have tasted much tastier than one u have ever had. :)

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    Since when did you become an expert on romance?!!

    - theCipher

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