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Torn

To burn being who I am, or die and be who they want me to be,
To forget you, or simply forget me,
To fade to numb, or endlessly think,
To fight and drown, or give up and sink,

Through all the twists of fate, curves and bends,
I always knew how it ends,
No matter what I choose,
……………………………… I lose.

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  1. February 16, 2008 at 9:03 pm | #1

    a very nice one!
    “To forget you, or simply forget me,

    To fight and drown, or give up and sink,
    …”

    but,
    you might not know how it ends,
    & no matter what you choose,
    I’m sure you wont lose!

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    thanks for your words.

    - theCipher

  2. February 16, 2008 at 11:35 pm | #2

    i guess i should just “read” this one.. no analysis :) .. very nice one man, flowing with feelings.. beautiful… what more can i say? … keep writing!!

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    i will, i will :)

    - theCipher

  3. cyberpunk
    February 17, 2008 at 12:48 am | #3

    Don’t give up hope, stand up and fight,
    If you know what you’re doing is right

    ‘Tis better to fight and drown,
    Than let twists of fate get you down

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    hmm… better to burn out than to fade away!!! … right?!

    - theCipher

  4. Cilla
    February 18, 2008 at 3:40 pm | #4

    love cyberpunk’s words…!!! and like Songs said even i am sure you won’t lose…in the end you’ll win…you always do!!!

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    yup, i’m superman ;)

    - theCipher

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